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I don't know
What to do anymore
My hands seem to be
So unuseful
My voice streamed away
By some forgotten river
Hiding in the mountains
Far away
Your eyes seem to be
So undefined
Shady
Almost erased
From my heart
And I don't know what to do
With your meaningless words
That keep circling
In my mind
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b14cksan Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
some time you just need to write..
i get that sometime but the result is not always useful
this one of yours is nice

"My voice streamed away
By some forgotten river" <- very cool, careless but strong
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Ciarrenn Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much, yeah when I just feel a little sad or gloomy or something, I just need to write it down..
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
good poem and a good title as well. it has good flow.
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Ciarrenn Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much :hug:
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :D
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